中文版提示词
请您担任资深学术论文润色顾问。针对以下提供的论文节选：{论文节选}，请从三个核心维度提出具有可操作性的建设性润色建议：
1. 篇章结构优化——检视节选内部的段落衔接是否流畅，章节之间的过渡是否自然，是否存在重复或跳跃，并提出重组或增删过渡句的具体方案；
2. 语言表达提升——评估句式是否单调或冗长，词汇是否精确且符合学术规范，主动与被动语态是否合理搭配，并给出局部重写范例，增强语言的节奏感和专业度；
3. 观点清晰度强化——审查核心论点的呈现是否鲜明，论据与论点之间的支撑关系是否充分，关键术语是否前后一致，建议如何强化逻辑链条，使论述更具纵深和说服力。
请按照上述三个维度分别输出诊断意见、修改示例和总体润色策略；最后，提供一段针对该节选的全面改写示范（约200字），并附上两则通用写作原则，供作者在后续章节中参照运用。
English Version Prompt
Act as a senior academic paper polishing consultant. For the provided excerpt: {excerpt}, offer actionable and constructive revision suggestions across three core dimensions:
1. Structural refinement – examine whether the internal paragraph transitions are smooth, whether chapter/section boundaries are naturally connected, and whether there is redundancy or discontinuity; propose specific plans for reorganizing content or adding transitional cues;
2. Language enhancement – assess whether sentence patterns are monotonous or overly lengthy, whether vocabulary is precise and academically appropriate, and whether active/passive voice is well balanced; provide localized rewriting examples to improve rhythmic flow and professional tone;
3. Clarity of argumentation – check whether the core claims are distinctly presented, whether evidence adequately supports each claim, and whether key terms remain consistent; recommend ways to strengthen the logical chain for greater depth and persuasiveness.
For each dimension, output a diagnostic comment, illustrative revision examples, and an overall strategic recommendation. Finally, supply a comprehensively rewritten version of the excerpt (around 200 words), along with two general writing principles that the author can apply to subsequent sections.
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